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Novel
« on: August 23, 2008, 08:49:26 am »
Hi!

I'm writing a furry sci-fi novel. It's not finished yet but I wonder what people think about.
You can read it here:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4493561/1/The_Golden_Towers

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Re: Novel
« Reply #1 on: August 23, 2008, 10:34:18 am »
Wow, that....that sure is a lot of words, right there.

...Yep.

Lotta words.

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Re: Novel
« Reply #2 on: August 23, 2008, 09:41:10 pm »
Is it a novel or a screenplay? Make up your mind!
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Re: Novel
« Reply #3 on: August 24, 2008, 07:18:32 am »
You know, I'd think that if you were serious about writing a "novel", the last place you would ever want to show it off to the world is fanfiction.net.

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Re: Novel
« Reply #4 on: August 24, 2008, 10:57:38 am »
You know, I'd think that if you were serious about writing a "novel", the last place you would ever want to show it off to the world is fanfiction.net.

Well, he needs some sort of staging point before he self-publishes it on Lulu, and Yiffstar just lacks that certain je ne sais quoi

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Re: Novel
« Reply #5 on: September 04, 2008, 06:27:12 am »
So, what's your opinion?

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Re: Novel
« Reply #6 on: September 04, 2008, 08:04:41 am »
Go away.
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Re: Novel
« Reply #7 on: September 04, 2008, 01:50:42 pm »

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Re: Novel
« Reply #8 on: September 07, 2008, 04:15:37 am »
May I ask why?

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Re: Novel
« Reply #9 on: September 07, 2008, 09:16:48 am »
May I ask why?

Go read some of the other posts, maybe.
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Re: Novel
« Reply #10 on: September 07, 2008, 11:51:38 am »
What other posts? The only posts I see are the ones that want me to go away.

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Re: Novel
« Reply #11 on: September 07, 2008, 09:07:53 pm »
keep trying
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Re: Novel
« Reply #12 on: September 08, 2008, 12:32:18 pm »
It seems like you don't like my creation. Well I'm not surprised at all.

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Re: Novel
« Reply #13 on: September 08, 2008, 03:14:11 pm »
It seems like you don't like my creation. Well I'm not surprised at all.

Lemme guess: you came here expecting us to fall all over ourselves to suck your e-penis because you're writing a "novel", right?

Yeah...we don't work that way.  For one, your "novel" is hosted on FANFICTION.NET -- if you were serious about writing a "novel", I think the last place you'd want to ask for feedback on it is that particular den of idiocy.

Second point: nobody writes a "furry" novel.  If you want to categorize your work as "furry", that's your call, but you're never going to get any real publisher to take you seriously (that is, if you're looking to get your work published -- and considering you say you're working on a "novel", that would be my guess).

In short: coming to a site that mocks furries and the furry fandom and asking us to read an unfinished "novel" posted on a site where you can find Avatar/X-Men crossover fanfiction if you click on the right options was a dumb decision, and you should be goddamned ashamed of yourself for making it.

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Re: Novel
« Reply #14 on: September 09, 2008, 10:06:57 pm »
Even furry publishing houses have standards, you know. Although they prefer the big 'a' word in most cases.
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Re: Novel
« Reply #15 on: November 03, 2008, 07:16:54 pm »
Why do you skip lines between every sentence?
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Re: Novel
« Reply #16 on: November 04, 2008, 07:25:39 pm »
Because he's not skipping a single line on the mirror?
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