It seems like you don't like my creation. Well I'm not surprised at all.
Lemme guess: you came here expecting us to fall all over ourselves to suck your e-penis because you're writing a "novel", right?
Yeah...we don't work that way. For one, your "novel" is hosted on
FANFICTION.NET -- if you were serious about writing a "novel", I think the last place you'd want to ask for feedback on it is that particular den of idiocy.
Second point: nobody writes a "furry" novel. If you want to categorize your work as "furry", that's your call, but you're never going to get any real publisher to take you seriously (that is, if you're looking to get your work published -- and considering you say you're working on a "novel", that would be my guess).
In short: coming to a site that mocks furries and the furry fandom and asking us to read an unfinished "novel" posted on a site where you can find Avatar/X-Men crossover fanfiction if you click on the right options was a dumb decision, and you should be goddamned ashamed of yourself for making it.